I am Learning to add Detail to my Writing.

Room 8 has been learning how to add detail into our writing to make it more interesting. We can think about the questions: Who? What? Where? When? How? and Why? to help us add this detail.
We have recently started swimming again and chose this shared experience to write about.

On Friday we went to the pool. First we had time to play around and I got to splash the whole of Year 2. I ran from start to end. When I was running I felt warm and relaxed but a little bit cold but I liked it. The water was very cold and a tinsy bit warm. I also did free time at the end.

My Reflection

I think that I did a good job with my writing because I tried hard to add detail. It is a little bit tricky to add detail to my writing because I keep on forgetting things. I think that it is important to add detail because it helps to make your writing more interesting.